Today we begin a poetry unit.
Poetry is boring and it can bore you to sleep!!!!!!!
We read love that Dog by Sharon
Today we begin a poetry unit.
Poetry is boring and it can bore you to sleep!!!!!!!
We read love that Dog by Sharon Creech.
Ø Pause #1: THIS IS BORING ME TO DEATH. ATLEAST IT’S BETTER THAN MOST POEMS I’VE READ.
Ø Pause #2: NEEDS TO BE LONGER AND LESS STUPID.
Ø Pause #3: GETTING A LITTLE BETTER BUT STILL STUPID AND SHORT.
Ø Pause #4: THE AUTHOR IS TOO CONCERNED ABOUT THEM. DOSEN’T PAY ATTENTION TO HER AUDIENCE.
Ø Pause #5: GETTING A LITTLE BETTER BUT STILL BORING.
Ø Pause#6: STILL STUPID. NEEDS MORE WORDS.
Ø End: THIS POEM IS SO MUCH MORE BORING THAN BOOKS. GOT A LITTLE MORE BETTER.
I THINK JACK GOT HIS INSPERATION FROM OTHER POETS, MAINLY WALTER.D.MYERS AND EVERY DAY LIFE.
HERE’S MY POEM ATTEMPT:
TATERSALAD IS NOT MADE OF TOMATERS, NANERS, OR BANNERS. IT’S MADE OF TATERS . CAN’T USE FRIED GREEN TOMATERS. YOU JUST USE TATERS NOT WHOLE BUT SMOOSHED TATERS. SO IF IT’S TATERSALAD I CALL MYSELF TATERSALAD
BY: BRENDAN
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